redo-ing this one scene i have beef withE

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imo literally the most minor changes would've spared this scene bro. please. im. augh. hhhnnggfhhjj.

I went ahead and cut out all Pomni narration bc it just took me out of it when I watched it through with that dialogue. I'll likely make a BTS since I have scrapped audios from fricking around to find out.

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Is this perfect? probably not. There's a few ways to go about it and different dialogue changes that could be done. imo the scene could've been cut entirely.

RQ: No, this isn't me trying to "do a better job than Gooseworx", and I still stand by the statements I made in that one video. I will be bold and say the script needed at least another draft or two.

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YT vid: https://youtu.be/ByYv-S7_yqc?si=oQJfNie5XF8C2CWY