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This an old animation I made last year to show how Alageddon started. I posted it on youtube here https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TFKoUWJw9sQ

It all started with two 12 year olds named "Albert" and "Alfred". Albert being the brunette kid who acts like a rattlesnake. And Alfred being the blue on with pigtails.

It all started when some bullies took Alfred's doll, but Albert wanted to stand up for Alfred and saved their doll. But Alfred didn't wanted to be saved so Alfred sliced Albert's eye. The teacher caught them and thought they were fighting, so they were sent to afterschool dentention.

Albert was rightfully pissed off that Alfred would put the blame on him for saving them. But Albert still wanted to help Alfred. Matter of fact this day was the first day Albert started to act like this. He was on an aderiline rush because he felt like there was nothing to lose anymore, so he wanted to risk it to help another kid whose a stranger.

They broke out of dentention and that day was the start of everything...

Too bad every time Albert does something nice, he always gets unlucky because he ends up getting killed by Alfred in the end...

(Extra commentary)

Ever since I posted this animation a year ago, I was always inscure about my voice acting and writing. I mean the characters are currently 12 in this animation so I have an excuse. 12 year olds are always trying to be edgy and this also takes place during 2017, so it's pretty time accurate. After a year... I kinda would change the dialougue in the final. And also their designs might change to, Albert should have longer hair as a kid before he cuts it short. And also wear something more "modest" because of his mother's choices. And Alfred is supposed to look more like a sheep, so Alfred should have an afro. And I want Alfred to have moon charms for their night motif.

Decided to reupload the animation to newgrounds since I want my account to be focused on my ocs.