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For one of my assignments I had to plan a business around the subject of computers and create a presentation for it.

Although this isn't the actual presentation, this is the intro for it that I did. I know its a bit rough around the edges but I was quite proud of it regardless as I haven't done any flash for a long time.

I tried to keep the file size down, so the quality of the sound and graphics are a bit iffy... but give me your opinions anyway.

Thanks,

Paul J

*EDITED After reading reviews*

Sorry, I should of pointed out this isn't aimed at the 12 year old kids that wanted to see some soft porn, some stick men fighting or abusive language...

I only entered this to this site, coz Its the only 'flash rating' site I know and wanted some feedback... not on how funny or entertaining it is, but simply how it measures up for what its supposed to be... a Intro to a fictional firm... If you want to be entertained with humourus dialogue why are you even looking at it?

Thanks,

P.S cheers for the feedback

EDIT - Oops just realised my film is only 500 wide yet I set in NG portal it as 550 wide... thats why it wasn't displaying 100% correct...