Oh fckin boy where to begin with this.
First Welcome to weeks what 7 and 8 of learning 3D modeling and animation. This marks my fourth real animation and wow i bit off more than i could chew. Starting things off the entire point of this was to learn how to animate a fight scene, an interaction between two people and i say i accomplished that goal but there are alot of things i will have to work on in the future.
1.) The characters still feel rigid despite a lot more time being put into each pose specifically the enemy. The good news is it's not THAT jarring as there is enough fast paced stuff going on to draw your eyes away from the inconsistency.
2.) I really lost steam after the first exchange. I realized i can't just be improving this i need to meticulously plan out the events otherwise i waste time just staring at the screen trying to visualize what comes next. So you can kind of tell the rushed ending.
In terms of what was good I really, realy find the cinematic scenes to be the best, the staring up at the enemy, the fight in the rain it's so picturesque and really shows improvement in the camera work.
But all criticism aside, i kind of in awe at my work, its not great, not even good. But if i was to do this 6 months ago i would have never be able to complete it. so i am more so proud of the steps it took to get here. I am motivated to continue my learning but perhaps shorter or less dynamic scenes for the next couple HAHA.
Anyway thanks for reading and watching!